I really dont like the intro, and its because of that bassline, it needs work, fixing that will help the rest of teh track.
The pad is a bit overpowering. I really like the airy vocal pad, but I'd sidechain compress it a little more with the kick so it breathes better in the mix. Overall, I think the production still needs quite a bit of work, but the foundations are definitely there. The main areas to focus on are the sound design, the balance between elements, and making the whole track feel more cohesive. With some refinement, it could come together really well.
Hello ,mate 1st, thanks for posting! my 1st glance is that evertying thing feels very flat, these is no range in chords/notes etc. I'd go listen to some of your favorite house tracks on spotify and listen to each layer/instrument. also add some more automations to the synth sound, so it changes over 8 to 16 bars.
The piano stabs here sound really good on their own, maybe add more of this throughout the track
